On Thursday I went to school. When I got to school I went to go hit Carlos & Robert and jimmy because they took my lock and I started going after them. Then they took my jacket so then when I got my stuff it was time to go upstairs. When I got upstairs my teacher said we were going to have to pick a topic and the topics were comics,films,baseball,fashion,Rap music,basketball,video games,soccer,animals,visual arts,and last but not least the news.the topic was news because the new have a lot of thing that i can work with and what i wanted to work with was election of 2008
because i like Hillary Clinton.
2 comments:
How many sentences is this? Try to add periods in all the right places.
Hi Dail,
I agree with Ms. Averbach. You've got fantastic posts with all of those details, but I found them a little hard to read because all of the words just swarmed together. I think you added more detail than just about anyone else in your class though! Keep up the great work.
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